Team,
I finally got a chance to review the files that CLoneWolf made. For those lines where he made multiple versions, which was most of them, here is a list of the ones I preferred. My priority for choosing was clarity (I intentionally listened without the text script available) followed by tone (appropriate emotion and word emphasis). Where applicable, I added some comments or observations:
shaper_absurd-clearly-you-must-think3
shaper_all-proceed-within-my1
shaper_are-your-deficiency-natural3
shaper_cold-dead-ship2 (very little difference between these 3)
shaper_contraband-detected1
shaper_docking-operation-begun1
shaper_docking-operation-complete3
shaper_give-up-i-ve-already-played-out2
shaper_im-not-amused-by-poor-liar3
shaper_in-death-alone-is3
shaper_i-will-sift-through3 (to be honest, I don't understand anything after "ashes", but I like the tone)
shaper_i-will-unmake-you1
shaper_maintain-speed-and2
shaper_move-into-white-indicators1
shaper_no-contraband-detected3
shaper_perhaps-there-is-something1
shaper_pitiful-undermensh-you-cant-even-die-well2 (you emphasize the words "pitiful" and "can't" which is good, but should also emphasize "die" to carry the desired meaning; the word "undermensch" is [slightly misspelled] German for "sub-human," is it not? Maybe the writers envisioned a German accent for the Shapers -- if so they should have said something before you did all this work
shaper_request-clearance3
shaper_some-art-can-only-be1
shaper_the-day-continues2
shaper_the-functional-may-still-be2
shaper_the-old-make-room-for2
shaper_the-universe-doesnt-hide1
shaper_though-you-struggle1 (can't understand anything after "struggle" on either version)
shaper_unable-to-comply3 ("comply" should rhyme with the Japanese toast "kam-pai" or the English phrase "some pie")
shaper_were-you-not-so-poorly-constructed2 (I particularly liked this one!)
shaper_what-a-waste-at-least3
shaper_you-are-not-authorized2
shaper_you-are-not-in-dock2
shaper_you-are-the-most-inelegant3
shaper_your-course-is-deviating1
shaper_your-phenotype-has-proven1
shaper_you-win-by-luck-alone3
The issue of the words being cut off was not noticeable to me. We can proceed with getting these ready for SVN, unless you want to redo the 4 on which I made suggestions for improvement. I'm sorry to admit that, when I was listening to these, visions of Sacha Baron Cohen playing the French driver in "The Legend of Ricky Bobby" kept intruding into my mind.
Sorry this took so long. I'm on a business trip with only my work computer, a locked-down Vista notebook. This task gave me an excuse to make an updated Ubuntu boot CD, so I could play the OGGs.
Turbo